My Novels

Friday, May 30, 2014

Chapter 1 - A Life Unplanned

Here is a snippet of my novel. I hope this will help you decide if this might be a good summer read!!
 



~~ CHAPTER 1 ~~
I never dreamed when I would lose my mom, it would be a heartbreaking mystery, one that would never be solved. 

“There is no easy way to say this, so I’m just going to say it,” Dad started. “Your mom has died,” he said to me.  “Who?” I said.  “Your mom,” he repeated.  Again I asked who?  “Your mom, Kate; Kate has died.”  Andy jumped out of his chair and came over to me, knelt down and repeated what my dad had just told me.  It would not register. I could not hear it.  I shut down and watched myself as if I was watching a movie.  Watching a movie meant it was not real. It was just a story—a Lifetime movie being played out on the TV screen. 

*   *   *   *

Andy and I were in Fort Lauderdale for a short trip.  We had just moved from Ohio to Idaho a few months earlier.  Andy was working with a group of doctors and attending an audiology meeting.  Since I was not yet working, I decided to go along.  My days were spent alone, since Andy was in meetings, but I was going to relax by the pool, read, maybe go for walks, even though I was not the type to venture out on my own.  I felt depressed that week and wanted to call Mom just to chat.  I even went back to our room and picked up the phone once or twice, but then I felt silly crying on her shoulder about being so homesick.  I did not want her thinking I was unhappy.  I knew this was a good move for us, for Andy’s career, and probably the homesickness would  slowly abate.  Mom would worry if I told her I was having a hard time adjusting. So I did not call.

I had called her before we left for Florida.  It was a Friday afternoon, and I wanted her to know we would be away for a few days.  She sounded great, sounded happy for us.  The last words I heard from her before we hung up were “Tell Andy I love him.”  I knew exactly why she said that.  She knew Andy felt bad about us leaving her.  We had been married for 17 years by that time, and she was used to us living near her. My brother and sister lived out of state, but Andy and I lived a few miles from her.  She rarely asked us for help. Mom was so independent and so adamant about not ever being a burden to her kids, especially since her mother-in-law was more than interfering.  So she fully supported this move for us. 

A few days before we left Akron for the last time, Mom threw a family party for us.  Pamela Joy and Patrick and the nephews and nieces were there, along with my cousins.  It was such a good time. I can remember at one point Mom was just sitting in her favorite chair watching all the activity.  There was such a sense of peace and happiness on her face, almost like a physical aura.  Family meant everything to her, and there was nothing better than having us all together.

On moving day, Mom stopped by and gave me a crystal creamer and pitcher. She wanted me to have something from her house for my new home.  I was surprised to see her drive up. She had a smile on her face as she stepped out of the car. 

“How’s it going?” she asked. 

“Okay,” I replied, “but it sure is taking longer than I thought it would. I guess we’ll get it done eventually, though.”

 “You’ll be on your way before you know it,” Mom replied. “I hope you don’t mind, but I brought you a little something I wanted you to have from my house to your new Idaho home.  It’s just one of my creamer and pitcher sets, but since it’s pretty plain, I thought it would look nice however you decorate the house.”  She might as well have given me diamonds, that gift was that precious to me. 

She did not stay long, because Mom never wanted to interfere, as if she could!  I didn’t  want her to leave because I didn’t know when I would see her again.   It had been such a great summer.  Andy left in early June for Idaho, and I stayed behind to hopefully sell the house.  Andy had accepted the job in the spring after we flew out there for an interview.  He went back for a quick trip to get a little bit of training in before he actually started.  When he got back, we spent six weeks doing a marathon update of the house.  We painted, wallpapered, pulled up carpeting.  Just about every nook and cranny of the house was spiffied up and looked perfect for selling.  The day Andy left for Idaho, I had a hard time saying good-bye.  I knew we would be together at some point, but not knowing how long that would be was really hard.  Andy told me later, as he was driving down the street from the home he grew up in and lived his married life for 17 years, that he could not fight back the tears. 


We moved to Idaho in October, but because both of us were not ready to spend the holidays alone, we came back to Ohio that November for Thanksgiving.  We went to my sister’s in Pittsburgh.  It had been a long time since the whole family was together for that day.  My brother and his kids came, and Pamela Joy’s kids were there, and even Mom’s first great-grandchild was there to celebrate the day, only a little over a month old.  It was an absolutely perfect day.  It was the last day we all spent together with Mom.  It was a gift from God.  There is no question in my heart and soul it was a gift from God.  He knew this would be our last time together. 

*   *   *   *

“What happened?” I said it so matter-of-factly that you would have thought my dad had just told me he dented his fender.  His reply was to call my sister, and she would give me the details.  So I called my sister, again acting as if I was checking up on a minor car accident.  She was scared for me and told my brother to call me, which he did.  He asked me if I was okay, to which I replied I was fine.  I was coming to Akron right away; Andy would make the arrangements.  Mr. Spock from Star Trek would have been proud of my logical demeanor.  I was fine, just fine.   I had lucked out big time.  Because my brother and sister had moved away when they married, I knew it would be up to me to deal with telling them when Mom was seriously ill or had died. They had taken care of me all of my life because Dad left the family when I was 9 months old.  So it was going to be my turn to help them through a difficult time. I would take care of Mom, take care of my brother and sister when the time came.  But that did not happen. I was the last person to find out Mom had died.   The last.  That was not how it was supposed to be. 

That week began with Pamela Joy trying to call Mom.  She was going through a nasty divorce and wanted to let Mom know about the next meeting with her ex and the lawyers.  She really did not want to call because Mom could be difficult to talk to about the situation, giving advice Pamela Joy did not want to hear or least was not ready to hear. Mom had been through a divorce and knew all too well what Pamela Joy was facing.  She tried Mom for a few days with no answer.  Mom had a busy, active life.  She volunteered at the hospital, got her hair done every week, went out frequently with her girlfriends. So it was no big deal when she did not answer the phone.  But by that Saturday when she still was not answering, it was time to worry.  A few other family members had been calling, too, wondering if Mom was traveling, visiting family maybe?

Pamela Joy called our cousin and asked if she would go over to the house.  Waiting to hear back seemed like hours.  The longer the phone did not ring, the more frightened Pamela Joy became.  She prayed it would just be a big misunderstanding, and Mom would call and laugh about the needless worry.  She called Patrick and told him what was going on.  She was afraid to try Mom’s house again. Patrick said he would call.  He did.  A man answered the phone “Farr residence.” It was not a voice my brother recognized.  He knew it was bad.  He asked for Kate and said he was her son.  The officer identified himself and gave Patrick the news.  Mom was gone. 

STOP IT, I silently screamed. JUST STOP IT!!

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